Friday 20 May 2016

Mcdonald's I say no

Persuasive planning Mcdonald’s  

What       Mcdonalds is harmful to the people in NZ.
Who       You
When      
Where     
How        The fat.
Why         Lot’s of fat.  salt . Gross things.

Explain, Elabourate, Example

Mcdonald’s is a terrible takeaway Sometimes the crew puts gross things in it on accident and sometimes on purpose. What if you found something gross in your burger I don’t think that would make you happy.
Mcdonald’s puts fat in absolutely everything and they even put fat in the Ice cream.  Fat is not good for you and can make a difference in how you live by eating a lot of fat it can be harmful and make you fat your selves. Fat is not good for you it can be very bad for you. When you are fat or overweight it is a bad thing because you could die from it. When you are overweight it is bad for your health.   

When you have too much salt which Mcdonald’s puts to much of it on everything you can get heart attacks. That is not a good thing what happens when you get a heart attack is that a part usually a muscle stops working and can sometimes be very fatal. Sometimes it can even kill you. It is not good to get takeouts too often maybe once twice a month at the most.

Someone once found a rat bone in their burger at Mcdonald’s. Another thing that happened was that somebody found a burger they had purchased was half eaten. Doesn’t that sound gross? Well I think it would be pretty weird to have purchased a burger and to find someone else got to it first or to chew on your Big Mac and have a rat bone in it.  

It doesn’t matter what Mcdonald’s says they're just trying to get customers. Do you know what you are putting into your body when you eat Mcdonald’s? They are unhygienic so you can get sick from it. Did you know that they actually put poison in their food to keep away the rats.

That doesn’t sound good so would you want to put that in your body?    

1 comment:

  1. After that story I do not want to eat Mc's donadls again

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