Friday 15 April 2016

Journal entry

Journal Entry Billy
I wish I could have taken that hit instead of Don. If I could turn back the time and take that hit I would. Everytime I think of Don I feel a tear start to trickle down my face. Whenever I hear a bang or pound I think of Don. I wish I would have known that he was a scab earlier and I would have forgiven him straight away. The waihi strike was peaceful and quiet until the Commissioner decided to take charge. When I looked into Don’s eyes I knew that he was really sorry about lying and I knew that he wasn’t like that anymore. Well we ended up on the same side in the end.      


This week in room 11 we have been writing journal entry's about a story called in the end. The soldiers best friend just died and we wrote a journal entry about it. It had to be powerful and dramatic.